Thursday, November 17, 2011

We started a poetry unit. Which I think is a careful way of choosing words but I’ve not been a big fan. I have listened to it sometimes
Pause#1: let them put your name on the board. Your poetry is good.
Pause#2: you’re getting good at poetry. So please let them put your name there.
Pause#3: you let them put your name up. You’re getting your confidence back.
Pause#4: what’s up with the car? I couldn’t tell what you meant.
Pause#5: you have a dog. You even made a poem about him.
Pause#6: man you must love sky. I think that was good poetry.
End:  you like Walter which is good because you like poetry. But that was a sad poem.

Jack got his inspiration from things that happen to him and from Walter dean Meyers.

Here is my attempted poem based off love that dog

My dog cooper
Cooper was a friendly dog
Who could always make you laugh
Who could always make you happy even when you’re sad
He is the best dog ever
That is how I describe my favorite dog
My dog cooper

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